Writing reflection

MY WRITING REFLECTIONS The past few weeks our class has been focusing on descriptive writing and have done writing about the power surge at Rainbows End,autumn leaves,Mount Everest and cross country.We have been learning about using first person and present tense in our writing. Paragraphing and sequencing our ideas correctly.And describing. Paragraphs are when you gather information about one topic and sequence them into ideas e.g. see, hear, smell, taste. E.g. in steed of using I WENT you would use I am GOING. AUTUMN LEAVES Crunch and twist the leaf prances, falling swiftly from the branches. Musty, rusty golden leaves flying in the autumn breeze. Falling from the tall trees spinning twirling then they rushed sadly all the leaves got crushed, by Mr Stockmans lawn mower. By BRIAR

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